Comments on: What do you think of my book? http://www.twinsarefun.com/2010/03/what-do-you-think-of-my-book/ Celebrating All Things Related to Parenting Twins Fri, 10 Feb 2012 14:35:09 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: ^_~ http://www.twinsarefun.com/2010/03/what-do-you-think-of-my-book/comment-page-1/#comment-3905 ^_~ Fri, 19 Mar 2010 13:43:59 +0000 http://www.twinsarefun.com/2010/03/what-do-you-think-of-my-book/#comment-3905 that's very inventive and unique. i can't recall anything like throwing your own baby out of a 12 storey building window to save them, before. it reminds me a little of the Underworld series. but it's very good (= grammar mistakes? very few. i think you used the word "gotten" and it sounded wrong. replace it with "received" or something.<br><b>References : </b><br> that’s very inventive and unique.
i can’t recall anything like throwing your own baby out of a 12 storey building window to save them, before.

it reminds me a little of the Underworld series.
but it’s very good (=
grammar mistakes? very few. i think you used the word "gotten" and it sounded wrong. replace it with "received" or something.
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]]> By: Christine http://www.twinsarefun.com/2010/03/what-do-you-think-of-my-book/comment-page-1/#comment-3904 Christine Fri, 19 Mar 2010 13:08:59 +0000 http://www.twinsarefun.com/2010/03/what-do-you-think-of-my-book/#comment-3904 Hi! I think I read this yesterday....... anyways, yes, it's a cool idea/story. It sorta sounds like jumper, but not exactly. I warn you: there are lots of ideas close to this, so you'll have to make this pretty unique if you want it published. Maybe morph one of your other ideas into this story to make it more interesting, or make the story in the 1860's during the civil war, and the girl enters the army for the confederates or something. That idea is a little out there, but just to get you thinking. hope this helped, Christine<br><b>References : </b><br> Hi! I think I read this yesterday……. anyways, yes, it’s a cool idea/story. It sorta sounds like jumper, but not exactly. I warn you: there are lots of ideas close to this, so you’ll have to make this pretty unique if you want it published. Maybe morph one of your other ideas into this story to make it more interesting, or make the story in the 1860’s during the civil war, and the girl enters the army for the confederates or something. That idea is a little out there, but just to get you thinking.

hope this helped,
Christine
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